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Reading as a Writer
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Present your analysis of the data in a written form directed to an audience you think appropriate.
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Present your analysis of the data in a written form directed to an audience you think appropriate.
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Follow Frisch’s lead in considering what your analysis might mean about memory, education or the subject matter you chose to investigate.
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Don’t just tell the story of your research or summarize the results. Instead, use your data to make an argument about something. What does this mean? Who cares? So what? What other conversations does your work speak to? You might have to refer to others – and reference them appropriately.
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If your work leads you to think Frisch is wrong in some way, use your writing and the research you’ve done to speak back to him.
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There needs to be a context for your work. Frisch uses the debates about education going on at the time he was writing. What will your frame be? Why (other than it was an assignment) did you do this work? If you can’t find any other context for you work, you can at least speak back to Frisch.
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Incorporate graphs or charts that make your findings easier to follow, but don’t except these visuals to substitute for careful written explanation and analysis. |
• Graphics don’t take the place of a discursive explanation of the data • A simple table could be the graphic • The graphic you choose should make sense with your project and fit in • Don’t just drop the graphic in; think about where it goes and why
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Higher order concerns:
Critical thinking:
Data analysis
Clear point supported by data/analysis
Appropriate research & survey questions (or explanation of what went wrong and how you might fix it)
Content
Ethical construction and execution of the survey
Acknowledging limits of claims
Interesting/appropriate frame, (who are you speaking to? Why do this? So what?)
Organization
Appropriate form of presentation
Clarity of graphic information and explanation of data
Lower order concerns:
Language, Style, Correctness
Establishes authority as a researcher – correct citation of other sources, acknowledge limits, explain survey process and results with awareness to ethical practice
Correctness of prose – evidence of proof-reading
Clarity of language
Caption for graphic
Include a copy of your survey and something of your results as appendices if they don’t fit into the actual presentation
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